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I want to reach the stars
But I'm grounded by gravity
I see others surpass me
And I'm saddened by my stagnation

I want to learn how to fly
But it's impossible without wings
I'm defective at being human
I seem to be excluded from the secret
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Didier-3d Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really well written! 
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017
Thanks!
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MensjeDeZeemeermin Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Grim, but incisive--doesn't flinch from the subject.
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
Thanks!
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Professional Writer
Lovely and beautifully written. :love: 
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Thanks.
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017  Professional Writer
You're welcome. ♥
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
:hug:
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Slashh-20000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
I get it how u feel sorry I didnt comment sooner my friend and hey u finally got a membership this was a good sort of thing a good little piece of writing I do miss talking someitmes I hope your getting better or that theres more peoploe around
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Thanks.
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Slashh-20000 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Hope your ok
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
Not doing the greatest actually...
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Slashh-20000 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
Awww buddy
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AraShadow Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is me on DA lolol.

That aside i do actually relate to this and its true of alot of other people out there as well.
These words are a good representation of that.

Amazing work!
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Thanks. Sorry to hear that you can relate. :hug:
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AraShadow Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Happens to everyone at some point XD
Your Welcome!
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BlackLacedMinx Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Student Writer
This was tragically beautiful
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Thanks!
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BlackLacedMinx Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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